The trailer above represents our initial trailer draft for our short horror/thriller film called 'KARMA'. However, I still need to add some more appropriate scenes from the locker, park scene and toilet scene in order to captivate the target audiences attention more. This short video was edited by me, Geneva using iMovie editing software; which it was simple and easy to use and work my way through it.
The screenshot above represents comments based on my initial draft that we have created for our short film. Vivian & Anne are both my peers as they're 17 years old which would set a good example of a sample for my target audiences, which was 16 year olds and above. Since they're both girls, they have feedback nice and encouraging comments as seen above. However, Anne have feed backed stating I need to add more work as she stated when I was talking to her face-to-face that 'I need to choose a more appropriate scenes to establish the genre horror/thriller; as I understood her clearly. From this feedback gained, I will be replacing some scenes included on my initial trailer draft onto my final trailer to make it more gruesome and scary based on the comments received.
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