Our Treatment Presentation & Feedbacks Gained

Based on the feedback we received about our treatment (initial ideas), they mentioned how we need to change the ending of our idea of Diana dying in the end. Some suggest drug overdose, committing suicide and so this had led us to re-think the ending of our short film; if we should change it or not.

This has led us to improve the narrative story of our short film because we did not want to make it seem like it's a drama issue because this will make the target audiences feel sympathy, which would go against the genre of our short film - which was horror/thriller. I also have noticed how the use of black and white, as in flashback was useful to include it onto our story as it will add value to the narrative and perspective part of our film.